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Raquel Blue the Revonnahgander by Venetia-the-Hedgehog

:icongreekstyle:
First of all I really like all the patterns you used on her clothes and skin. They make your work look more realistic. I am impressed especially with that effect, since most cartoonists don't bother doing that, even the most skilled and popular.

However, what bugs me is that you don't seem to have a certain lighting source, since random parts of her body are highlighted. I suggest you find a certain light source and shade and highlight, using that source as a guide.

Also, the tools you use to create her hair is also buggind me, since they looks kinda unrealistic, and that contraticts with the other patterns. At this point I think it would be better if you could spend dome time drawing her hair flock by flock, lineless or not. I know this can be exhausting, but I believe this may help you improve youw artwork.

Conclusion:
Vision: Your picture doesn't really represent something. You just wanted to introduce your new fc.

Originality: I can't give a high score for fan characters. I am sorry for that.

Technique: I pretty much explained my reasoning.

Impact: Your picture impressed me since I looked at it in my message box!
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much for the critique! :love: I will try my best!!!! :heart: Thanks! XD
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:icongreekstyle:
GreekStyle Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! Ελπίζω να μην δυσαρεστηθούν οι άλλοι σου οπαδοί με την βαθμολογία
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Μπα. Δεν νομίζω που το προσέχουν! XD
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:icongreekstyle:
GreekStyle Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
στην προηγούμενη κριτική κάποια άτομα έλεγαν πως ήμουν άδικη. Πάντως από ότι είδα τώρα όλοι με θεωρούν δίκαια XP
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ποια προηγούμενη κριτική? XD
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:icongreekstyle:
GreekStyle Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
αυτή [link]
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:iconvenetia-the-hedgehog:
Venetia-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Μια χαρά είναι η κριτική σου! XD
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:icongreekstyle:
GreekStyle Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
χαίρομαι ^^
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